Hello, all! ^^ So these past few months have been… hectic. Not just in my life, but with everything that is going on in the world. So much so that I oftentimes just wonder if this is all the world has come to. Hate, anger, and violence. If that is what reigns in the world and if there is truly any hope at all.
But today, I sat down to write.
I’ve been struggling a lot with writing these past few days. Especially seeing as I have a three-page edit letter for Island Keepers that I wrote to myself that is over 1,500 words long filled with a lot of structural issues that shall be most torturous to fix.
But instead of a new novel I’d been planning to write or Island Keepers, this came out.
So… yeah, hope you enjoy.
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Marigold and I kneel on the dirt by the weeping willow. The willow’s browned, shriveled branches hang over us like a guard. Snow lies around the roots, and the dirt is cold as ice.
Marigold’s hazel eyes are bright with silent tears. Her brown hair is tangled and matted, as always. I want to reach out an arm to comfort her, but I am frozen like a statue. Tears run down my cheeks as well, while my heart feels as if it has been ripped wide open.
Fia stands over the two of us. But though she is still and silent, I see the tears streaking down her pale, freckled face.
None of us can say anything.
Until finally, Marigold lifts her trembling voice, “Dove?”
I look up at the mention of my name and bite my lip. “It’s time,” I whisper. “She is gone. They have taken her.”
A tiny, choked sob escapes Marigold. “Taken her life, you mean.” She clenches her fists so hard her knuckles turn white. “I hate them. I hate them, I hate them, I hate them,” she whispers in fury.
I stay silent.
Mother had always known this day would come. She always knew things like this, somehow. She’d only had two final wishes, before her death.
The first, to be buried beneath the Ever Willow. The huge willow tree that’d stood here for thousands of years, the willow tree that’d been home to nests of countless skysongs – the silver birds that sang hope to all those who would hear.
And the final…
I turn to Fia.
Fia bites her lip. “She is safe,” she whispers.
I swallow. “Good.”
Mother’s second wish.
That our sister, Evelyn, be sent across the Misted Seas, with our brother.
“They won’t find anything,” Fia had protested.
For the Misted Seas were exactly what their name said they were. Seas that surrounded our island home, completely covered in mist.
No one had ever wanted to travel the Misted Seas. We’d never needed to.
But now that the Silver Guard had taken our home…
“What if they drown?” Marigold whispers. “Or get lost?”
“Evelyn won’t,” I say. I can still remember our older sister. Tall. Strong. Brave. “She’ll find something. I know she will.”
“Then what about our home?”
To this, I have no answer.
No answer but the words that’d been ingrained in me since birth.
When ruin comes
and shadows swoop from the sky,
forget not hope.
When the sky falls
and the oceans turn against you,
forget not hope.
Remember the skysongs
who first came here,
and sang life and magic
into the land.
Through the clouds
there lies light.
And the night will break
to let through dawn.
So carry on.
Carry on.
Forget not hope.
Forget not hope.
My voice is quiet as the wind as I sing the lyrics of the song in a whisper.
The first and last song ever sung by the skysongs.
The first, when they created this island.
The last, when they vanished.
Fia joins in as well, as does Marigold. If the Silver Guard heard us, we’d be thrown to the dark prisons in half a second.
But we are alone.
Three orphan sisters, beneath the weeping willow.
No.
Not alone.
Shakily, I lift my head to the clouded sky.
Though Mother is dead, though Evelyn and Liam are gone, I know we must continue on.
How, I do not know.
But Mother did not die for us to give up.
Lia did not sacrifice herself for this land, only to have us surrender to the Silver Guard.
Carry on.
And that is what we must do.
I close my eyes, saying one final prayer, before I get to my feet, looking up at the sky.
The Silver Guard may be strong.
They may have the power of swords, of blood, of death.
But we shall carry on.
Through the night.
To dawn.
Forget not hope.
Forget not hope.
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So that’s my short story! I haven’t really posted many short stories on my blog before, but I really do think that this short piece really reminds me of why I write — to spread hope. And I hope y’all found a bit of hope in this short story. Let me know down in the comments what you think of this!! (And if you think I should post some more short stories!)
Oh, yes, and I also wanted to hint at something super exciting coming on the blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, yeah….. on a scale from one to ten, would any of y’all possibly be interested in a writing contest where your short story shall get posted on my blog? 🙂 If thou art confused… all shall be revealed tomorrow………….
Till next time,
-Isabelle
The story is beautiful Isabelle , especially the poem and yes I’d be interested in a writing contest, its a great way to procrastinate writing my own book Yay!
Thank you, Hallie!! ^^ I had a really great time writing it. Lol, alright, well then, the writing contest guidelines and all shall be revealed at 12 AM PST, October 10… XD
As always Isabelle, you bring out the emotion in your writing, that makes us all wish to read more.
Truly a great short story. Thanks for sharing it.
Thank you so much! Thanks so much for reading!!
I LOVED this story, Isabelle!! It contained such deep emotions. Consider me duly impressed!
Thank you!!! I’m really glad to hear that!
Whoah…
That was beautiful.
Truly so.
Thank you for sharing it with the world.
Thanks, Lola! That means a lot to hear. 🙂 I did not mean to write this short story, but it’s what came out anyway. I’m really glad you like it!
This was such a beautiful piece of work. How incredibly woven was the message and how I felt dearly for the characters even before I have read a whole paragraph. I love how you pull at our heart strings and have the gift to dig underneath our emotional surface and bring out the pain, hurt, hope and strength we have inside. Such such a beautiful God given talent. I love this so much! I would really love a longer story about these three girls and how they gain hope. I’d love to hear more of that if your heart is into it. Either way, thank you for sharing. You really do have a gift for writing.
Thank you so much! I’m really glad to hear you love this story! ^^ And I’m really glad you felt for the characters and that the story brought out those emotions. I’ve considered making the story longer, though I’m not really sure where to even start writing this! I think if I did, it would definitely count as literary fiction instead of the usual action and adventure I write. (And possibly have an open ending, like this short story.) Perhaps once I wrangle the beast that is Island Keepers, I shall work on this story a bit more, if it’s meant to be a longer story.
I liked the story a lot. I usually don’t like stories where all important details aren’t given, but this one had just the right amount of what was told vs. what you had to infer. If it seems like it should be a longer story, I would definitely be interested in reading more. 🙂
P.S. Good luck with Island Keepers! 🙂
Thank you!! I’m so glad to hear that! ^^ I think a lot of my short stories are like that, which might be odd, since at school, I’ve always done terribly in the “inferring” part of reading. And perhaps someday this shall be made into a longer story! Perhaps someday………. 😉